Gandhi was
born on October , 1869 in pomander India , Gandhi’s real name is Mohandas ,
they call him Mohandas .Mohandas means great soul , he wanted to help Indian people through freedom. His early
childhood was that of interest, he had two parents, a brother, and two
sisters.
Gandhi got
married to a woman named Kasturba. Now like all those wedding where arranged
marriage that just means that the parents choose who to be married to and when
to get married. The first year of Gandhi’s marriage he and his wife had four
kids, few years later he moved to England to study law and politics, he started
working at a law firm, soon he realized that he wouldn't success .He then went
to south Africa and lived there for twenty one years from 1893-1914, at this
time India were ridiculed everywhere and could not walk down the street.
One of the most important things about Gandhi, he has a very pacifist personally and nothing swayed him. Gandhi became the president of indent in 1915. He is well known for his personality. He secured freedom for our country following the principles of thaw and non-violence. He was one of the best leader, just because of Ghandi, Indian gown its independence on 15th of august in 1947. Unfortunately Gandhi pass away in 1948. He played a big role in India. He was a simple person and did most of his personal job of his women, he thought about freedom in idea through nonviolence and peaceful method. We will always be remember him in our hearts.
One of the most important things about Gandhi, he has a very pacifist personally and nothing swayed him. Gandhi became the president of indent in 1915. He is well known for his personality. He secured freedom for our country following the principles of thaw and non-violence. He was one of the best leader, just because of Ghandi, Indian gown its independence on 15th of august in 1947. Unfortunately Gandhi pass away in 1948. He played a big role in India. He was a simple person and did most of his personal job of his women, he thought about freedom in idea through nonviolence and peaceful method. We will always be remember him in our hearts.
Inspiring and fascinating blog. Heroes define our world. I love your perspective; that they don’t need a cape or superpowers, but that they can be regular people too. In that way, we can all aspire to be heroes in our own lives.
ReplyDeleteConstructively:
- Some posts have very little or no opinion whatsoever. (ex. Ghandi post.)
- Some spelling / grammar issues. (singular vs plural, bravo vs brave, layers vs lasers, “mans”, its vs it, capitalizing a month, here vs hero, “Nalson”, etc.)
- Some awkward phrasing that needs a quick edit, (ex.” Hero are never scared of other , they are, most of the times they are very brave .”)
- Sourcing not always clear. How did you get this information. Without a source, it’s plagiarism. (ex. post 3)
- Some text formatting issues (ex. 1st and last paragraph of the Nelson Mandela post.)
- Post your actual videos instead of just the links
“The first year of Gandhi’s marriage he and his wife had four kids.” erm, how is that even possible, considering he didn’t have quadruplets?
Good stuff.